Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Coleman Example Presentation
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This example is a sort of "middle of the road" example. It is good, but there are things that could still be better about it. All names have been removed for privacy.

For example:
  • the kiosk could have a bit more storage for product. Or they could have better explained where the additional product might be in relation to this kiosk.
  • the team could have SHOWN the user rather than just explained in text.
Things they did really well though:
  • Nice, organized story to their presentation.
  • Consideration for the packaging to have a continued use.
  • Overall visual unity to the entire proposal.
  • Good balance of showing their process versus their end results. They did not show every step of their process, but they explained where important ideas came from.
  • Really nice visuals and a realistic product, that also fit into a nice niche.
I hope that this example helps give you all a better idea of where this is heading.

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